they run off ahead
independent from me now
both are growing up
Week ending poetry.
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that was beautiful!!! did you put your name over in the link at playgroups are no place for kids? if not…go do it! if you have…good job!!
xo
Welcome to haiku Fridays! You did a great job and I love the accompanying picture. They do grow up too fast, don’t they.
Awe. Sweet and sad. That pic says so much too.
Great ku!
They grow way too fast, don’t they??
The picture is the perfect way to illustrate your ku. Welcome to the world of haiku!
Truly…it happens way too fast.
That was lovely, it made me tear!
@suchsimplepleasures ~ yes, I did. And the sister site too. :)
@kathryn ~ :)
@AFF – Thank you! I took it yesterday @ the park and it seemed to fit.
@scylla – Aw, see that’s it! Now I’m tearing up too!
That haiku sums it up perfectly! Great work here.
I always complain that my kids don’t do enough on their own (6,4,2, 4 mos), but when they do it’s “they don’t need me anymore!”
So emotional, this mommy thing.
Nice haiku.
I hear there are pills that can stop that from happening.
Beautiful.
@SAM – Thank you. :)
@Jenni – It really is – that’s how I feel too. And part of the reason I still call my toddler a baby and won’t potty train her. *lol*
Awww… it makes me so sad. They grow up too fast! I want the pitter patter of little feet again. :)
Why can’t they stay this young forever? It’s just not right!
Great haiku!
Beautiful.
hope all is well. haven’t seen you around in a few days!!!
take care
What a lovely and moving haiku. Well done!
~ a Weekend Blog Hopper. ;)